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About 10 min writing task

October 29, 2009 4 comments

well as you all know we did a 10 min writing task I wrote that the poor people need money or home they are living in the road or stairs of mrt or bts like Rosna and rimgim I want to have a gurp of helping homeless people or poor people so I really want to work and find out about it and have an idea and take actions. if you want to save people of sickness homeless cold and uncofident please help them. If you want to come and let’s be a helping gurp.help poor people programe in nist please join in

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Bassy Ciocorelli: Part 3

October 29, 2009 1 comment

THIS IS A SHORT ONE:

Bassy was very naughty at that time. He was actually in Ms. Rena’s class and not Ms. Gillian. He was forced to move due to being silly with his friend. When he first came to my class, he acted like he was a 1 year old kid. He didnt even know what was going on. His reaction made everyone laugh, including the girls and exactly 1 minute after the laughing started, he asked to enter the toilet. When he was in the toilet, he was making very silly noises. My best friend Po-Shun found out [with his sense of hearing] that Bassy was crying. He just yelled it out. After that the cry became clearer. and a lot more louder. He came out with his eyes all red. When he was in 1rn, the still had the good and manly style of walking. It changed to becoming sloppy and like a grandpa [It will be more specific in part 4]. His style of talking changed and his attitude changed. He made all enemies friends [even the ones who make fun of him and laugh at him like me] and he made all friends enemies. He said to his friends that they were “LOUSY” and useless. He said to all his enemies that they were “TOO FUNNY AND TOO GOOD” friends.

Part 4 will be presented tommorow and so will the promo of my book.

ARE THOSE CAPITAL WORDS IN THE STORY SOUNDING FAMILIAR?

 

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Changing Our World

October 29, 2009 22 comments

Yesterday, I challenged you to do a ten minute writing task. You had to think about a serious question – what would you like to change about the world you live in? You then had to follow the writing proces – in only ten minutes – in order to answer the question. The process was:

  • Think/brainstorm
  • Plan
  • Write first draft
  • Revise
  • Edit
  • Get someone to proofread

Now you need to publish your writing by making a comment on this posting.

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